Wednesday, October 29, 2008

HAPPY HALLOWEENIES

For Halloween, I asked my English students to write a scary story. I gave them the first sentence ("It was a dark and stormy night,") and they took turns adding a sentence to the story. This is the result. Be warned: It is very, very spooky:

"It was a dark and stormy night. The black bats and ghost flew in the dark scary. The ghost girl hang on the tree. Scary face in the image in the wall. At the night day, many people girls pregnanting. In my dream I met an old man, he is actually werewolf is a man promise with devil to become rich. Every full moon he is become werewolf for drank blood girls. All girls direct die.

"Meanwhile, my friends meeting a zombie on the streets. The little boy saw Zombie with chainsaw and red blood in the forest and the little boy ran fast. Her face is very scary with the bloods. I saw a big bat! Oh my god, I was afraid. Wo....h...afraid!!! I feel the ghost in front of me in the night and I direct a scream. There's something who hide behind the tree! We are scream. Then the girl directed a scream. A...A...A...A....and the girl fainted. I said, "help! help! help! help!" No, I can't help you!!! hikshikshikshisks. My body cold. My tooth moved. I is cry. Then I cry and running to the toilet. And I sleeping in toilet.

"Finally, the girl remembered that today is Halloween day. The children said "Trick or Treat?" And the children have a candy from the people. They are very happy and make party together.
"The moment disappear.
"Halloween?
" *Story all true no slip of the pen."

In Indonesia, instead of candy people eat deep fried fish, bones and all. Everyone wants me to eat fish bones. All true, no slip of the pen.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

A brilliant tale.

Rebecca said...

This is the greatest thing ever!

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